dw817's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Keep'it'up]

Lookin' good !

This game is similar to the one that Gelatin Guy did as an intro for his 99k Wink.

In any case, yours is a full-blown game with great rotating action on the soccer ball.

Very nice !

This is a good game !

David

[Flash-Helper Vol. 1]

Not good ..

While I do appreciate the fact that you are trying to help other flash developers, this particular issue of audio compression has already been addressed with:

Compression Tutorial by Trunks62

Flash 1-2-3 Volume 2 by Oberon9580

I'm grading for originality here. Sorry. :)

David

ImEric12 responds:

Yeah, I suppose you have a point. But looking at some of the reviews, it helps to give people reminders from time to time.

[Sai: The Shooting Gallery]

Pretty good ..

To those of you out there not being able to move your ship around, make sure your NUM-LOCK is LIT.

It uses the digits, not the arrow key presses, and the [Enter], not the [Spacebar] to fire.

Hitting [Enter] is not always received in a Flash. Max, could you use a different key for firing please for the future version of this shooter ?

Nice graphics, good scrolling background, jammin' music, and responsive controls. :)

David

maxmao2002 responds:

thanks for ur comment
we have had enough of this game and we want to try something else
it was a good stepstone for us in terms of techniques

[Atlantis 2 Demo (v.2)]

Nice job !

This is excellent work !
A game quite similar to the famous MYST.
This one is definitely a keeper.

Very well done. Please expand on this !

David

[New technology]

Well ..

I'm giving you a higher rating for graphics because the animation was actually pretty good for drawing the boxes, circles, and camera.

Calling everyone a monkey is not the start of a successful SWF. :) I got the humor even if some other people didn't.

David

[SPACE ESCAPE]

Well ..

I would have rated a lot higher, this is a NICE game idea with a good presentation but your graphics are out of whack. The orb appears off-screen half the time so I can't see it and the digits for both score and the # of orbs to select, you can only see the top half of the digits.

Clean this up, and I'll be glad to re-rate you again on this.

David

[Lockagotchi]

Not good ..

Having had the original Tamogotchi, this one had no scale or score in there to tell how well you were doing with your pet. Failing that, it's not much of a game.

Sorry. :)

David

[Dodge 3.0]

Nice job

This was an interesting game you made. The entry of both name/password may be slightly redundant however.

Incidentally, if you want to expand on the game (it's a bit of work) but I think it will be worth it.

Have levels to the game.
Level 1, you're a frog avoiding cars a la Frogger.
Level 2, you're a spaceship avoiding meteors.
Level 3, you're a Ninja avoiding snakes,
etc.

So each time a level is passed the player is rewarded with new graphics and new background music to each level.

That's what us players like to see anyways, is diversity, surprises, and that which piques our curiosity to play more. :)

David