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[Frank Rizzo Soundboard]

Well ..

Soundboards have been done before.
Not one specifically for Frank Rizzo.

Excellent job (and patience!) to put this all together. :)

David

[AntiTerrorism Department]

Really good ..

It's a little tricky to tell some options however. Mission could be interpreted as instructions and Game as to start the game instead of the reverse.

Give the short-squat little butt-kicking-terrorist guy some hands and eyes (inner circles) too. :)

Geez he could skewer a giraffe (from the neck up) with his Katana it's so long !

If the player can get shot NO MATTER which vertical height he is, then there is no real reason for him to be able to ascend vertically at all (he can't dodge shots) and just keep him on the same horizontal track all the time, only going up if there is a door.

Excellent game, EviLudy.

David

[Banana Bash - Version 1.0]

Nice ..

Can you make it so the collisions aren't checking the distance but actual image ? I've run into that Lizard's tongue and Spiders quite a few times and in truth, the monkey wasn't actually touching them.

Otherwise, GREAT GAME !

David

[Make A Shooter]

Very nice !

Once again, another excellent tutorial, this one a bit more of a crash course for a seasoned FLASH developer, but still helpful nonetheless !

THANK YOU !

David

[Make A Preloader]

Well done !

Since I am learning FLASH myself, I have found this tutorial you put together most helpful and instructive.

THANK YOU !

David

RejectProductions responds:

If you are trying to learn flash you should check out my other tutorial about making a shooting game, which you can find at http://www.rejectpro.cjb.net

[Space Infinity 2 Demo]

Well ..

It's pretty bad when the background music is louder than the primary sound effects of a game ..

It would be a lot better if the explosion for an enemy ship that was shot was better, had more colors in it.

Other than that, it's your basic space shooter.
:)

Excellent menu presentation, transition, and smooth responsive controls.

David

[MOHAA-anti-air-operation]

Good Game !

That pistol sure packs a whollop to knock down a jet like that with one hit ! :)

David

Wonderer responds:

Finally a good game has got a good review, thanks.

[Mohaa Tutorial (flash mx)]

Pretty good ..

Do you think you can make a tutorial for writing a Flash GAME not a movie, from beginning to end where you specify which menus to select from FLASH 5 ?

That might help out a lot of people.
Great job on this tutorial.
I see I have my homework cut out for me now. :)

David

Wonderer responds:

First thanks, but it's for flash 6 and my program is in another language, so dare not to translate it. and all I do is tell you the directions.

[Galactic Space Invaders]

Lookin' good !

I haven't commented before on these Space Invader clones, there are quite a few of them in Flash now. But one thing that never seems to be done correctly is the movement of the Invaders.

They don't all move at one time, in the original Space Invaders, they each move one step at a time one right after the other and then repeats to start over again.

Excellent artwork for the original invaders, tank, and saucer.

Good job on usage of raw key searches instead of normal key reading. :)

David