dw817's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wonka's Waste: Toxic Choc]

Pretty good ..

Instead of looking for a normal arrow keystroke, can you look for a RAW keystroke instead so by holding down the LEFT or RIGHT arrow key, Sloth (not my favorite character), will glide immediately in that direction without waiting for key-repeat to click in ?

Nicely done game. :)

David

[Uss Enterprise: A Cadet's]

Lookin' real good !

I love pick-your-own-path games !
This was EXCELLENT !

Look, you're a very talented artist. With some of the other parodies that you've done, do you think you could make a pick-your-own-path for some more classic genre like Matrix, Old Star Trek, Final Fantasy, Zelda, Mario Bros., or Megaman ?

Give it some thought.
Really do appreciate the work you put into this !
:)

David

[Create A Sloth]

Not good ..

You are an excellent artist, animator, and builder of FLASH. Please lose the "sloth" character in your works and develop a more likeable hero/heroine. Thanks. :)

David

[Battle Tanx]

Pretty good ..

Not all of us have a room-mate, however.
Could you please make a version for 1-player ?

Good menu presentation, graphics, animation, smooth controls. :)

Would be nice if when you defeat your opponent tank that it gives you a good eye-candy explosion (maybe taking out a city block) *grin*

David

[snipers: ww2]

Pretty good ..

While it's unrealistic in real life, you shouldn't have the player have the ability of getting shot from targets they can't see.

The game is VERY hard to play and the cross-hair for the shooter is just barely there.

Otherwise very good graphics, presentation, menus, animation, and execution. :)

David

[Quick Pic]

Lookin' good !

Maybe give option of choosing from 3 different decks like:

Flowers (already in)
Jewels (each colored differently)
Playing Cards (10 J Q A and the suits CCHD)

GREAT Game, Dunja !

:)

David

[The Dancing pig]

Not bad ..

Maybe decrease the gravity for the parts so they don't fall down so fast when doing the dance maneuvers.

Maybe change the face to something memorable like our President or So Damn Insane. :)

David

[Teh UFO]

Lookin' good !

Actually this reminds me of an old GWBasic game that did the same thing except you held down the SHIFT key to thrust upwards in a moving corridor.

However, this a good rendition of it. :)

David

[Slots]

Lookin' good !

Do you think you could change the bell for winning to the actual bell they use in Las Vegas or Louisiana Slot Machines ? If you're not familiar with it, it's sort of like a firebell at school.

EXCELLENT SLOT MACHINE !

David

[Mini Game Mania]

Not good ..

Games of Shootin', Reflex, "Find It", "Luck", Misc.

These are all nice games but they all lack one thing. RANDOMIZATION. It's no fun once you've won to see that the position of ALL items do not change or shuffle or randomize the 2nd time around.

A package like this was done for GBA called GOBS OF GAMES. You might look to that to see how you can add to this and how to randomize certain elements.

David