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[The Suicide Bomber]

it was good

However the part about washing the feet and him falling to his demise ? That really didn't fit in the picture. Most suicide victims always leave a way to get out of their problems. They don't necessarily want to blame themselves for their misfortunes and will seek ANY reason to blame someone else saying it's their fault, (and they pull the trigger because of this belief).

The "victim" didn't act entirely correct with the policeman's words. Also, suicide (and bombing) is a very serious thing. There should be QUITE a bit more distress in the audio voices.

Still, nicely done.

David

[Artbreak]

good

All except for the ending of getting swatted.
That was a nice serious film with good artistic merit until then.

David

TmsT responds:

This was the first movie that I submitted here that ends with a main character getting splattered...
I wonder if I'm becoming predictable... (-:>

[Blanco y Negro]

very good

For your first attempt at SWF, this is OUTSTANDING work. :)

David

[The Matrix Cinemargh]

Good but ..

No rewatch value.
That's important when you are making a SWF. :)
The dance went on a little long.

Otherwise excellent artwork and animation.

David

[Toy Story Cinemargh]

nicely done

Some of the best animation I have ever seen in SWF ! Keep it up ! :)

David

[The Grim Reaper Show]

wow !

Great Job ! You really cleared up some things for me about "own" religions ! :)

David

[The Evil News]

my ...

Most of the other SWFs you did were some real mindf*cks and teases but this one was EXCELLENT and very well played out !

I can't wait to die ! :D

David

[Fukemon 1- The original!!]

very bad

And this is coming from someone who likes Pokemon and was hoping for a good rip.

Lose the text bubbles and let the animation tell the story like VGDC does.

[Rise of the MK: Part 1]

very good

If this is a serious film, which it seems, you should lay off of the fart/crap jokes for these. Other than that you do excellent work.
Another 10.

[Mario VS. Sonic (VGDC)]

good

but not as great as your Mack Daddy 2 & 3.
Do you have a Link Vs. Mario planned ? :)