dw817's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chinchilla XZ]

Well ..

The rodents need to be able to speak on their own (using playback 2x speed), not text bubbles. And watching two cut-out photos of mice (?) scattering with each other didn't look very impressive after a-while.

You did a GREAT job of OVERKILL animation which has always needed to be seen in FLASH with this kind of story (baddie vs. baddie).

David

[Alien Grand Theft Auto]

Everything was okay ..

Until you had you-know-who pop out of the trunk.
Really detracted from the animation, which was quite good BTW !

David

Pieass responds:

Thanks............ the boot bit kinda sucked i know..

[Stickman Joyride]

Well ..

Rather convenient all those people lined up in front of the truck to get run over.

Cute audio of the mickey-speech.

Was funny when he first started up tho.

WAHOO ! :)

David

[Self Portrait]

Neat ..

That was really cool how you drew yourself.
You're a great artist too. :)

David

[Bowling Buddies]

Great !

That was really amusing and unexpected !
Excellent style and sense of humor.
:)

David

[EEYORE]

Well ..

You have some very good animation talent but the drawings really lacked anything more than Pac-man ghosts with legs.

Good camera control, rapid animation, clouds, skyline, explosions, music (acid is never my fav.!).

David

Sludgo responds:

Yeah, I am not a great artist. More of a visionary, with not much brain to paper skill. oh well, at least some of it was good na?

[Pokemon Sex Toys]

Pretty good ..

Showing these items in USE on various Pokemon would DEFINITELY have added to this film. :)

Nice job.
:)
David

[Dance and death DX]

Not good ..

I =REALLY= didn't understand what the video was about. Picture of a dog with a cat rolling around each other. Stick figures, didn't animate, talked about the Munsters.

Further, it started over without first cutting off the initial music so there were 2 musics playing then one on-top of the other.

Didn't make much sense.
Sorry. :)

David

[The Blading Fighter]

Well ..

This was pretty good !
Nice fadein and fadeout of the sprites.
Music should NOT just cut-off like that after playing for 3 seconds. Use a FLASHKIT Mp3 loop or something.

Nice job on text bubbles.
Odd that the player's portrait appeared in one bubble-frame and no-where else.

Not much of a story, baddie against another baddie ..

It's a start. :)

David

[Green Episode one Teaser]

Well ..

There was very little animation to speak of.
Photos of people converted to 2-color .GIFs and inverted, it was a nice touch. But this movie definitely needed something more than that.

The one ring, to rule them all ?
Sorry, but that sounded like something from Lord Of The Rings ..

Ah well. :)

David