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I would say Bill Plympton better not look behind him lest he see you catching up. Nicely drawn !

Fantishow responds:

Well shit, I'm flattered. Thank you.

[Poo Time Machine]

I think you've got something with this Trudy. I think an adult-version of Garbage Pail kids where Trudy is just one of the twisted children who might be crazy, disgusting, and interesting.

Music once again is VERY good !

Looking forward to future incarnations of Trudy.

koit responds:

Thanks kindly for all of your reviews across my videos - much appreciated and honest too. We likey !

[Eat McDonalds Bitch!]

Not Good ..

Don't expect a call from Ray Kroc anytime soon. :)

David

PureCarnage responds:

I don't.

[Super Mario Toads Rage 8]

* Well .. *

You have some artistic and animation talent no doubt.
But seeing two "mushroom people ?" bludgeon each other between bloody fists over the death of Wario is no Sushi Picnic.

Needs - ah- better sound and DEFINITELY better story material.

=David=

mchawking responds:

right on, the story is a bit lacking but I've been making this up as I go.

~Nate Johnson
natenation dot com!

[Bump in the Night]

Good ..

But I saw this coming.
Sounded just like a bedspring's squeaking. :)

Good use of fades albeit absent from frame animations.

David

SecretAgentRege responds:

haha, yeah, it is kinda predictable if you either know me, or have the same mindset. It was supposed to sound sort of like bed springs, though; the end wouldn't have worked if it was, say, a monster's growl. I'm surprised more people don't find it extremely predictable.

thanks for the review

[In the blink of an eye...]

Very nicely done ..

I would rate higher but you slashed the wrist in the wrong location. You do it directly across just below the palm and you can't cut slow like that. It has to be fast and hard or you never wind up doing it at all.

Visually it should appear like red pearls are jumping out. The blood sprays and does hit the face. If you cut deep enough, which I did, the flesh burbles out like rubber-bands underneath the opening.

You can't walk around in a daze like that without spraying blood everywhere, when he went to go for the pills, his wrist was fine. Not artistically correct.

Generally you run a bath after you've consumed the pills and get in it, clothed if you like, so the blood can flow freely and not clot.

It's a good attempt at suicide but sometimes you have to live it to know it. :)

David

firetrap responds:

he isnt actually cutting his wrist - it's more self harm. im not sure, but i believe the cut wouldnt be visible in the pill scene, either, due to the angle of the cut, thank anyway, though :)

[Monotone]

Well ..

Flickering backwards book with Play printed also backwards is not a positive entrance.

Good original graphics, nice Beatles music.
Animation matched music closely.

Nice. :)

David

MonkeyClock responds:

It was actually Shakespeare =)

I can't help noticing you voted incrediby low despite your good review, what's going on there?

[New Aol Marketing Ideas]

A little advice ..

Shooting the viewer is not considered a positive thing.

Just think about that for a bit. Okay, that's long enough, now sleep on it. :)

David

ForgottenPyro responds:

I understand the movie wasn't all that good, but it was one of my first. As for your rational to critisize me; I hope you gave me a bad review because it sucked graphic wise, not because the reason you gave. If it WAS because the reason you gave then you are a narrow minded jackass... or a person in charge of some marketing section of a company. If the latter is the case, get back to work, if the former (and more likely one of the two) you may rot in hell with Hitler and Stalin.

[The Unknown Hacker]

Well ..

You are looking for Feedback ?
Lose the music, it really grates on the ears.

Draw something HAPPY, I know you can ! :)

David

MephistonX responds:

the music aint that bad plus the theme aint happy so why draw it happy unless you mean draw it in a satanic extra frakishly happy for no reason apart from to scare people way hmm might try it

[Dragon Teeth XI]

Well ..

I'm glad you kids are having a great time, but some of us are actually writing Flash. :)

David

Razholio responds:

Some of you are writing flash? Yes. But not you! I checked out what you have so far and all I saw was some half-assed kaleidoscope made from a mathematical calculation. Congratulations! I've been using flash for about half an hour. What about you?
That's right...