dw817's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Arrogancy Opening Submit!]

Very nice !

Do you plan to make a game or series with your talent or is this a multi-team effort ?

In any case, it was EXCELLENT.

ALL MY 5 R BELONG TO THIS!

David

[PlatiumCombat MC Tribute]

Well ..

If this is a tribute to the great MADNESS series, it's pretty good. But you should forge ahead on your own with new ideas and territory. :)

David

[<Ctrl Alt Delete>]

Not good ..

I have never understood what it is with the fruits, clocks, and voice synthesizer. There are quite a few of these out there so this isn't going to get a very high rating for originality.

Sorry. :)

David

DorkBerryClock responds:

have you been living in a cave for the past 3 years?

[Activation Assassination]

Not good ..

If it wasn't for the fact that you are a good artist, NONE of your submissions would be accepted. Think about it.

You have room for SERIOUS improvement in your storylines and plot. Random violence is not the solution.

David

[Adventures of Retard Boy]

Not good ..

You have some real artistic and animation talent and you are letting it go to waste on this crap.

What could you do that would be productive in Flash ?

David

[A pacman day "By TeckBOT"]

Not good ..

Don't worry, I'm not going to BLAM this.
But you really should think about what you are doing and where you are going with your stories.

Mario has been done many many times.
More popular now it seems is inserting MPEGs into your SWF. It's a terrible waste of space. Flash was designed for vector graphics originally.

That's all from here. :)

David

[Defender Vol. 3.085]

Neat !

Not much of a storyline I could follow but you are one very talented artist and animator ! :)

David

Hiver responds:

Thanks... But your review of my "Adventures of Retard Boy" kinda hurt my feelings... I mean, come on now, that was my first flash movie ever. I have no idea why it's still here. I'll redeem myself by making an "Adventure's of Retard Boy II".

[Fire Safety with Kyle]

Not good ..

This SWF is WAAAY too big for what it presented.
Stick figures even if they had photo heads.

Sorry. :)

David

[Mega Moronic Dare Devil]

Not good ..

Tim My, please stick with writing Flash games.
You have a real talent for that. :)

David

[SMB : It's Not My Day]

Not good ..

It could just be me, but I've seen a lot of Mario parodies now, where Sprites are ripped from somewhere and the semblance of a story is formed.

Now, some people have done a REALLY good job at this, like VGDC does especially for their Mack Daddy eps.

It's just old to me, that's all. I'm wanting to see vector graphics not re-run Sprites. Sorry. :)

David