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[Osama-Whack 1.6]

good game

Thank you for not using a stretched JPEG of Osama or using a freakish voice when he is hit (or waiting to get hit) a la Joe Cartoon.

I found it pretty hard to whack all 5 of them but could focus on the center 3. You might make a whack-a-mole game where you use 3-5 keys from the keyboard alone.

Since he was captured recently, you could make a scene where he is (attempting) to surrender from the hole in the ground where he was living and getting brutally shot by the player or soldiers. Just a touch. :)

[Monkey Capture]

not bad

Leave out the big intro about the government being unable to stop the monkeys (really!)
Instead of continuing to animate after they are shot they should freeze and fade out. That would REALLY let you know that you shot them.

Looking forward to seeing an improvement to this game.

David

[Highschool of the Apes]

nicely done

A Pick-Your-Own-Path in Shockwave, I'm very
impressed !

David