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[Soundboard - Scooby Doo]

Well ..

CD, can see that you put some effort into this.

A Soundboard is used to make prank phone calls.
It's not necessarily just a random collection of sounds. The sounds are chosen in such a way that natural conversation can be initiated and continued during. None of the sounds in here were very appropriate for that.

Ah well. :)

David

Cyberdevil responds:

Do you really think that there is any way you can make a prank call with the stuff they say in Scooby Doo?I dont even think that ive ever heard them say hi or hello.Oh well,thanks for the review anyways.

[Rammer Dress-up 2(fuller)]

Rammer !

I really like your work and I'm not very impressed by this dress-up ! Your first one was much better. Could you please make a 2nd (3rd?) dressup where you drag the articles of clothing/items/emoticons ? This clicking on the buttons to dressup is really awful.

Thanks !

David

Rammer responds:

i hate drag n drops myself, so imnot going to create a whole nother dressup just for u. if dozens of other ppl wanted a drag n drop, maybe i would, but otherwise, no. this one has many, many less limitations, like space for example. instead of putting all the crap all over the place where u cant see it, its just a click away.

[fat mans generator]

Good ..

You'll win more votes with the NG reviewers by having a pretty girl to strip.

Much prefer the drag-clothing rather than arrow-keys for forced clothing/entries. :)

VERY original graphics.

David

russss9 responds:

I dislike the NG reviewers but i love you?

[Silhouette V1]

Uh oh ..

Many problems in this game. You are attempting to write a 3-Dimensional game using stick-figures. Unless you plan on drawing the shadows for each one, the game is damn-near impossible to play without getting killed for lining up your sights to shoot them.

That's it. :)

David

GlockEH responds:

Its not supposed to be 3d, if it was it would have shadows. Its scaling, uno like he is walking up and down a hill. Thats why you need to be lined up, its not that hard either just hold space in and shoot your arse off.

[Ultimate Tutorial]

Well ..

I like my Tutorial better. :)

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=146143

David

DELETED-1 responds:

Hey thanks for the vote!!!

low...but appreciated. I'm open to all your comments.

[EVER-CHANGE #4]

Enjoyed that !

Desperately needs color to those ball though.
:)

David

C360 responds:

Haha, ya..sorta plain and boring. Just consider it a test for the future. ;)

[Mad World v1.0]

Oh yeah ..

Nice game !
Bloodthirsty little driver at the wheel though ?
:)

David

splitting-headache responds:

HAH YA i spend most of my days running over padestrians in my car anyways so why not make a game of it

[Thief: quest for jewels]

Nice job ..

This is quite an enjoyable and challenging game !
How many levels does it go to ?
Good work. :)

Smooth graphics, animation, presentation, and menu designs.

David

Unicamper responds:

15 lvls plus a bonus one!

[Lobster Quest (Demo)]

Pretty good ..

If this is supposed to be a true RPG, then you might add random encounters when the Lobster leaves from one room to the next. Also a way of viewing the Lobster's Status (ready weapon, armor, items, talismans, tokens, etc.)

Needs background music and FLASHKIT could help here. Other than that, pretty neat !

Looking forward to seeing this updated .. :)

David

Leigh responds:

Well it was generally supposed to be a regular adventure game, but I really like your ideas.

[Vehicular Homicide]

Pretty good ..

Please change the WASD keys to the normal arrow keys, that's why we have them on the keyboard.
:)

Good menus, presentation, and gameplay.
Scoreboard text was a bit big for the frame so some of it gets cut off in the visual.

David

calculon000 responds:

Im getting a lot of reviews who wanted me to use the arrow keys instead of wasd for the controls, so the next one I make will let you choose at the beginning.