Not good ..
I think I've seen more than my fair share of fruity clocks with synthesized voices. I'm not sure who started this craze but it's pretty old now.
Nonetheless, this was VERY WELL animated and presented. :)
David
Not good ..
I think I've seen more than my fair share of fruity clocks with synthesized voices. I'm not sure who started this craze but it's pretty old now.
Nonetheless, this was VERY WELL animated and presented. :)
David
I thank you for the compliment
oh yeah FYI
I STARTED THIS CRAZE
Not good ..
Please no more stick figures ..
Suggestion, don't draw faces on the stick figures, leave them blank. Think it looks even worse with a face drawn on them.
Good use of animation.
Excellent use of Squaresoft's music, but most of their music is excellent. :)
David
well Im gonna make an episode 2 yes this was to short. If a lot of viewers dont want a face on the charactor I may be able to change that. This may just be a three episode series I really dont know. Not much of a series but also I think I should add less background music I think that might be helpful on my movies anyway thanks for suggestions and if you would like to contact me my email is azrag_azrag@yahoo.com we can discuss some stuff over the messenger. Thanks for the review.
Better ..
But could be better in the future.
To achieve world peace you need to stab yourself ?
That's not a very positive message ..
Story sucked, sorry ..
Looks like you're a pretty good animator though.
There was a bit of clicking in the audio. If you can get your G/F to do one of the voices, would add diversity. Think about a good story first.
OK ? :)
David
!!!!!!!
Dude, I am a chick! I don't have a gf! I don't even have a bf!! DX DX DX
As for stabbing of selves, I can't help but feel that way sometimes seeing how people act so stupid. o.x;
I think I'll put the fact that Taco, and I, are females in Grof 6. >_< >_< >_<
Well ..
You are a talented artist and animator, there is no doubt about that. Don't be so down about life .. It's really not that bad. Look at me, I'm on meds and finally balanced ..
Not saying you should rush right out and buy prescription drugs.. :)
I'll give you a 5 for all of this.
David
thanx mate, I made it when i was feeling a little depressed, i'm ok now although I havejust started work on a black-combdy toon set within the mind of a killer (its gonna b funny not depressing thoe!)
Not good ..
I have never understood what it is with the fruits, clocks, and voice synthesizer. There are quite a few of these out there so this isn't going to get a very high rating for originality.
Sorry. :)
David
have you been living in a cave for the past 3 years?
Very nice ..
Your Ninjas look a little rough cut ..
Is there some way you can make them more like Poninjas without stealing his work ?
Otherwise, excellent music, logo, and in-text presentations.
David
well, I took a look, and What I see is indeed nice, but at the same time, its a different style. You may like one more then the other, and in your case his style made you like mine less, and thats perfectly fine. But I like to go my own way, and try not to emulate other artists style, It is just something I'm against.
well done
Counting off a bit for pointless violence though.
That does seem to be a selling point to SWFs these days. :/
Your artwork and animation are EXCELLENT however.
David
Why count points off?
Was there some sort of criteria that I was unaware of?
How was it pointless violence? If I took it out, the story would have been very dull and nonsensical.
I'm glad you liked the animation and such. Thanks.
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